Film opening draft 6

5th Draft of Film Opening

4th draft - decisions decisions

Here is our fourth draft, again you can see that we have changed the 'ending' or our 'development of the narrative' by eliminating any close up shots of the face leaving the audience with the feet skidding and no music, eliminating any possible views that it could be a music video.

3rd draft of our film opening

Film draft 2

He is our film draft 2, it has taken a lot of editing to get to the stage it is now, a lot of sweat and tears, but I think its really progressing! Still some glitches that need to be worked on, and a sort of ending without finalising it.

Film draft 1

This is our first draft of our opening to our film. This is only a first draft and room for a lot of improvement but it gives us a basis on what we are looking for in our opening and gives us a faint outline of the structure. Obviously there will be other seasons that will be inserted to give effect and to make the auience want to see more.